Beneath the clouds of Venus

Beneath the clouds of Venus by John O'Brien

SJ P.2 N.1 1993

WALT: Use a graphic organiser to organise information from a text

WALT: identify adjectives in noun phrases.

This story gives us lots of information about planets but what bits are facts (True) and which are fiction (made up)? Complete this graphic organiser to detail all of the information from the text.

Learning about the planets
Fact (Non-Fiction)	Fiction
The clouds were covering Venus.   There are hardly any life on. There is no life on Venus not a single living thing on Venus.	>Swamps under the clouds of venus There are endless ocean beneath the cloud in Venus. There are floating islands and in that island there are oceans and wave as high as a mountains.

This story uses many adjectives (describing words) to describe the nouns (planet's, oceans and mountains)

Locate some noun phrases and underline the adjective.

eg. there were enormous trees

     the fluorescent clouds

Find 5 more examples

There are endless oceans Floating islands

There were huge swamps

there were firing Venus

In 30 years our phones will be like a little phone that can text and it will look funny. You can call some people. The screen is going to look like are brown and funky looking you can call people in just different country.your phones will look like a different shape it will be old it will have different songs. it doesn't need internet to go on something.

What cause the seasons

What cause the seasons

Define: Seasons happen  throughout  the year and included Autumn,winter,spring,summer

Desired: In autumn, the leaves start to change colour. They change to red, yellow, and brown. Also in  autumn, the leaves start to fall off of the trees. That is why autumn is also called the fall.  

In Winter  the trees and plants stop growing. Deciduous trees shed their leaves and plants grow slowly because the days are shorter and colder.

In spring it is warm coze like are heat.

In summer it get hot,hot,hot   

                          

church

On Sunday me and my family went to church at pukekohe it was a long way going there but I love going to . church First we woke up and bushed our teeth's than we went to the kitchen to do breakfast next we went in to the shower one by one after we all had a shower we had to get dressed up nicely into our clothes after that we went by car to church  it is fun. At church we have to sit down listen to the thigh's that the people is going to tell you. But first they will say something about you and god and than we all have to close our eye;s while they are saying the brae than they will talk for about 1 hour than we go off home and eat. 

My Weekend

On Saturday me and my family woke up early because we had to make sure our house is clean and tidy because someone special it coming to stay. When we worked up we started cleaning up we cleaned out the car,toilet,kind and bed room's.  After that we went by car to the airport to pick up my mum's uncle  up. By the time we got home me and my mum was cooking something for us to eat. After that we went to the park with my family to just play a little bit by the time we started play for a short time we went home so we can get really to go to sleep but before we went to sleep my dad did are pear.  

SUPER HERO POEM

SUPER HERO POEM

My superpower is to read people's mind  

I am strong, invisible,fit,

If I could, I would read people’s mind and then fix it all.

like A super girl that can fly and save people around the world   

People would see me and be relieved

because I go around and save them

With my SUPER power, I am grateful,kind and don’t let them down.

Kinder than all the helpful people in Auckland

I'm as super as can be.

When I use the SUPER powers within me.

china and dunedin

My story

My name is Natalie Grace Ling-yun but everyone calls me yani and I live at dunedin, I was born in china. When I was eleven years old I did something amazing without my parent. I travelled to shanghai,china,where I went to school for six weeks than I came back In a few days my dad decided that have need to go to school so they were talking to wallace about my school holidays in so wallis had a great idea that I should go to school in china for a while My parent has been keen for me to learn But my parent were dubious that I had never been away before. My school is called pingHe Bilingual school I was with twelve girls. I am tall for my age even in new zealand and I felt like are giant I was happy that I got to come to china and learn

That story is about me

I live in dunedin